the 2nd version (versi org puti)

a special 'film' for my dear friend ..i hope u can 'watch' the 'film' in ur mind..i rename the film title to...

'there you are'

i rename the main character to Hannah and the two male character to Kent and Max(sounds cool isnt it?) and Dyna (Hannah's housemate)


opening song from micha3l buble..havent met you yet
scene 1:
hannah standing next to the bride being her bestfriend's bridesmaid..the other side kent is the groom's bestman.,..eyes met..(electric!)..

scene 2:
back to apartmen..hannah receive a text msg from kent..dyna give a meaningful look to hannah when she knows who sent the text..(song ..perhaps,perhaps,perhaps)

scene 3:
max had lunch with hannah,max left his book on the table..max leave first.. hannah notice the book and try to catch on max.knowing that max is heading to the subway

the train scene ...
hannah see max .want to call his name but he already enters the train and the door was closing and at the same time hannah see max reaching his hand to a woman.,.she is smiling..hannah stop walking and the book seems to be heavy in her hand. hannah turn back ..walk away(whitney's song i will always love you..)

scene 4:
hannah comes home..switch on the computer..see max online..hannah sit down on the chair, hold the mouse and move the cursor to max's name and was about to click on max name when ..ping!! a chat box open..it was kent..'hi, hows the world's favourite bridesmaid doing?'.hannah smile and starting clicking the keys

scene 5:
song playing in the background(micha3l's bubl3 song all i do is dream of you)..
hannah is cleaning the apartment, dyna is in the kitchen making late breakfast...hannah's cellphone rings,....hannah look at the caller and go to her room...dyna in the kitchen look at hannah from the back wondering..

scene 6:
in a restaurant ..hannah sit facing max..max was asking for advise on a few matters..but actually max need some idea on how to propose a girl..hannah feels like she was stabbed in the heart,.smile and give ideas to max,,hannah try her best to stay calm and hide her feelings..
then someone come to hannah's table..it was kent,,
kent says 'hannah what are you doing here?' ..hannah smile and look at max..and says 'this is max my friend from work..he needs a little advise'...max give a look at hannah..
hannah smile and look back at kent 'perhaps you can help him'

kent : what? (clueless)
hannah look at max: max this is kent..my friend from college...

max and kent shakes hand ..hannah look at max and said 'remember my best friend's wedding few months ago? kent here was the bestman'..

scene 7:
in hannah's room, still lazy getting off the bed, hannah's phone rings..look at the screen..it was max

hannah: hello..
max: yes!!! she said yes!!!!
hannah: what?..(hannah come to her senses and get off the bed)..what?!!!!??
max: i did it, i got on my knees and asked her and she said yes! yes!
hannah: ...oh!..i guess...congratulations??..(hannah say the word and hung up..)

hannah sit down on her bed and cry..
dyna knock on hannah's room..hear a cry, enters hannah's room and see hannah crying..dyna come closer to hannah sit next to hannah and hug hannah.

scene 8:
hannah and dyna and some other girlfriends are eating in a restaurant..it was hannah's birthday..
then a waiter come with a bouquet of red roses..he said its for hannah..hannah was surprise and ask who gave it because the card only says happy birthday,..the other girlfriends tease hannah for having a secret admirer..then the waiter says its from the man outside the restaurant,..

hannah get off her chair and walk to the restaurant entrance and walk out with the flowers in her hand..hannah look around for a familiar face..then her eyes stop on a man standing next to a car across the road..hannah take a close look and smile..hannah cross the road and walk towards the man,..

hannah: there you are...
kent:hi hannah
hannah:hello to you
kent:(looking at hannah and point to the flowers in her hand) nice roses
hannah:(look on the flowers) yes indeed,,..i wonder who the sender is,...(smile and look at kent)
kent: i wonder who,,..

silence

kent:do ..you like the flowers?
hannah:...yes.. maybe.,,
kent: maybe?...
hannah: yes if i know who gave it and maybe because i dont know who is it from..
kent:(nodded and smile)..aa.. i get it..but really.. do you like it?(look at hannah)
hannah: i havent met a woman who doesnt like red roses and get roses from a mystery sender on her birthday..(look at kent)

eyes met
kent: so YOU LIKE it..
hannah: YES I do..

kent and hannah smile then laugh..

hannah: i like it
kent: ok ..thanks..
hannah: was it you? (smiling)
kent: (nodded)..guilty..(smile at hannah)

(song jas0n mr@z ,if it kills me..
Well, how long can I go on like this, wishing to kiss you
Before I rightly explode
And this double life I lead isn't healthy for me in fact it makes me nervous
If I get caught I could be risking it all
Well, baby there's a lot that I miss in case I'm wrong

All I really want to do is love you
A kind much closer than friends use
But I still cant say it after all we've been through

And all I really want from you is to feel me
As the feeling inside keeps building
And I will find a way to you if it kills me, if it kills me)

back in the restaurant dyna and the girls look at hannah and kent across the road from the glass wall ..they were happy and excited..

ending song..fr@nk sin@tra song, fly me to the moon.

p/s: ina i know this version is a bit different from the original one but hope u like it ^_______^ tell me what u think after u read it...if u read it laa..hehhe..happy birthday ina!